tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3537250274982016992.post7055693471702574681..comments2023-03-27T04:01:46.784-07:00Comments on Riverside Young Writers: Birds of a FeatherRiverside Young Writershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13884236476000843878noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3537250274982016992.post-11071319851067553602011-05-18T12:17:09.877-07:002011-05-18T12:17:09.877-07:00I think this might be the most accusatory poem you...I think this might be the most accusatory poem you've every writen. You actually wrote about someone (or a fictional someone) and I really enjoyed it. Your wordage (as always) was brilliant and I can't post my favorite lines because I would simply be reposting your whole poem. You're awesome!Haleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15554460700071287331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3537250274982016992.post-58875739323188502602011-05-18T12:12:11.019-07:002011-05-18T12:12:11.019-07:00Oh my gosh, this is beautiful!
It's hard to n...Oh my gosh, this is beautiful!<br /><br />It's hard to narrow down my favourite lines, because I absolutely adore every syllable of this poem! But I think this part is my favourite:<br /><br />"you’re not listening<br />sometimes you hear but<br />rarely understand as<br />you sit in the<br />wooden chair<br />whose roots are much<br />more grounded than my<br />loftily searching mind"<br /><br />:)Shaylihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07813566253712493491noreply@blogger.com