tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3537250274982016992.post8212616576666646011..comments2023-03-27T04:01:46.784-07:00Comments on Riverside Young Writers: The SkyRiverside Young Writershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13884236476000843878noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3537250274982016992.post-20579103753584963102011-05-17T13:15:58.237-07:002011-05-17T13:15:58.237-07:00Oooooo, what pretty imagery!
I really like this p...Oooooo, what pretty imagery!<br /><br />I really like this poem (who knew we were all so good at poetry?) and I absolutely love the images and wordage used to create them :)<br /><br />Favorite lines:<br />Blue bleeds into blue<br /><br />Mistress moon sings<br /><br />Soft voice silver white<br /><br />and<br /><br />Spreading her liquid blanketHaleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15554460700071287331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3537250274982016992.post-65885045860839044502011-05-16T17:22:58.885-07:002011-05-16T17:22:58.885-07:00Ash--great job--love, "Mistress moon sings
So...Ash--great job--love, "Mistress moon sings<br />Soft voice silver white<br />Spreading her liquid blanket<br />Magic soothing<br /> lulling<br />As solid as dreams" the alliteration and personificaion develops such strong imagery.Riverside Young Writershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13884236476000843878noreply@blogger.com