tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3537250274982016992.post8538387781157958121..comments2023-03-27T04:01:46.784-07:00Comments on Riverside Young Writers: Animal.Riverside Young Writershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13884236476000843878noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3537250274982016992.post-66708112200150457152011-05-18T13:50:21.048-07:002011-05-18T13:50:21.048-07:00Olivia is correct and thanks guys. :)Olivia is correct and thanks guys. :)Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05120932704544766221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3537250274982016992.post-35811002488157608612011-05-18T12:53:44.488-07:002011-05-18T12:53:44.488-07:00This poem makes me smile...and it shouldn't, g...This poem makes me smile...and it shouldn't, given the topic. But, I think it's because I can hear a little kid with an imaginary friend reading this, which is wonderful :) I love it, still! And Mrs. Fellinger, I think she may have used the button with the two arrows next to the "Q" on the keyboard...I think it's called "tab" but I might be wrong. :)Oliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00151127511487344618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3537250274982016992.post-71644720229185311242011-05-17T17:53:37.390-07:002011-05-17T17:53:37.390-07:00Okay Jenna I love your squid--but just a question-...Okay Jenna I love your squid--but just a question--how did you format that poem? I'm having the worse time posted my poems because I'm loosing my formats.Fell4tchnghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06049264497552871094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3537250274982016992.post-23690862869984644402011-05-17T13:20:00.556-07:002011-05-17T13:20:00.556-07:00So I already commented on this ages ago (back when...So I already commented on this ages ago (back when I brought in this fabulous prompt!) but just to say again,<br /><br />I love the child view point and how simplistic it sounds...those just may be the same thing...<br /><br />Also, the repetition of "Who said" is very nice, also showing just how a child (albiet and insane child) would view this situation.<br /><br />Me likes. You is be a good writer.Haleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15554460700071287331noreply@blogger.com