Little traces left
Washed away by the rolling sea
But life was here
This life not mine.
And I wonder
Where these steps sprung
And I wonder
Where they might lead.
And I wonder
When we might meet.
And I wonder
When I will see.
The day I realize -
I need you
And you need me.
The repetition of "wonder" is lovely :)
ReplyDeleteAlso, "I ned you and you need me" awww :(
It's short but beautiful and I greatly approve of your amazingness.
You make "love poems" of sorts seem very not cliche. More real or something... Does that make sense? haha
Anywho, I loves! Write more! :)
So agree with Haley..the "Little traces left" I can see--feel. Plus great use of a title--sets the whole poem up.
ReplyDeleteI loved "but life was here/this life not mine" Really poigniant. Simple, short, and beautiful!
ReplyDelete:3 You guys so sweet. <3 Gracias.
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