Tuesday, May 17, 2011

Mirror Girl

Poem-a-Day Challenge, Day Two! (This is for Monday, I forgot to post it!)

Mirror Girl

happy days and
happy nights fell day
after day in her world
of smiles and warmth
emanating from within
her very being

she’d never seen such a
joyful heart and
with confusion pouring
through her eyes, she 
noticed a reflection

she was her,
the mirror girl
not quite sure who
truly existed in
the crystalline pool of
ever-fooling mirages

she was burning,
flames of what she could
be contradicted mirror girl
who hid beneath the
cool waters with
embers for her innocent
soul, yet she was
her upside down—
an unchanged image displayed
from a worldly
viewpoint

she was never convinced who
the others saw, for
different times meant
different images

sometimes she managed
to let herself drown
in her ever smiling
           ever lovely
persona

forget to breath
forgot to
it was all too easy
to be unreal
but more real still
for the good of
some in her world
who saw and needed
the light in her

she hoped one day she’d
truly drown, following the
light into the mirage
like a mirror weight
to show the world what
they needed to see
and never come
up for air

~Olivia

2 comments:

  1. Olivia, beautiful diction--but I want you to know that not only is your diction beautiful--your poem is epic like--teaching us of the girl in the mirror--haunting--beautiful

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  2. Favorite lines:
    "with confusion pouring
    through her eyes

    the crystalline pool of
    ever-fooling mirages

    sometimes she managed
    to let herself drown
    in her ever smiling
    ever lovely
    persona"

    Your poetry is glorious and picturesque. I love it.

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