Ok, so you have the 5-line stanza thing going with the first two, but I think there's real power in cutting it off at 4 on the last one. It kinda hits the reader in the face, you know?
So...I'm just wondering, is this poem the narrator talking to themselves? If so, AWESOME!If no, STILL AWESOME!"I am greeted by a smirkA sneerBut a reply, at the very least."Favorite line right there^^^Also, you spelled greeted as "gretted" :)
Nathan - thanks. :)Haley - talking to themselves, yes. :) And thanks for the correction.